Saturday, November 3, 2012

Q & A of the Feedback

 Look over your returned argumentative essay paper. On your individual blog, answer the following questions. Based on the feedback,
       - what did you do well?
       - what do you need to work on?
       - how you will use this knowledge to strengthen future essays?
       - what grade would you have given yourself?
       -  what questions do you have?

1. On the essay paper, information on my topic was shown throughout the paper. The thesis statement was stated to the assignment. The conclusion was summarized and closes the essay.

2. The summary of the essay was strong and the thesis statement was there, both didn't fully connect as a whole. 
3. For future essays, to place facts and connect the details of the essay to the thesis statement.
4. The grade that I would have given would be a B. Since I gave information that tied to the idea of the megamachine, but did not give an understanding that links the details to the statement.
5. N/A

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